Victoria,
Your writing is always very easy to read, not in a way that makes it simple but it is very much like a novel. It has a beginning and an end that connects so well. You always use personal experience so well, it is just apart of the story you are telling to really get your point across as a writer. My favorite was your first essay and how you formatted an academic discussion around your personal experience. Also you blog was very easy to navigate, which I really appreciate because I am a little type A. Overall great job!
Kate
Victoria,
Your writing is always very easy to read, not in a way that makes it simple but it is very much like a novel. It has a beginning and an end that connects so well. You always use personal experience so well, it is just apart of the story you are telling to really get your point across as a writer. My favorite was your first essay and how you formatted an academic discussion around your personal experience. Also you blog was very easy to navigate, which I really appreciate because I am a little type A. Overall great job!
Kate